A Very Old Poem
What do you think?
Never published, if I’m not mistaken. I look at these old poems and think, what have I learned since, as a poet? What would I change?
Ars Poetica Light’s staying longer now. Over the winter the trunk of the woodpecker-tree sheared off at the top when I wasn’t looking. Emily Dickinson would have made a tiny monument of each day, in case it went on changing without her. Meanwhile, the cats watch me with their round eyes and pale stomachs. I am their alpha and omega, good for opening the refrigerator. Whitman, of course, would have collected Dickinson, cats, trees, the pencil- thin woodpecker’s tap. The one leaf shooting straight upwards in the wind would have been a revelation, trailing long sentences. Sometimes I don’t know why I bother to try, both extremes covered already. Maybe I do it for the cats, to hold them off a while longer, to keep them from getting fat.



This comment doesn't help anything, but I'll make it: you were, are, and will remain among my most treasured poetic voices– the keenness of your observation, your capacious intelligence, the vigor of your imagery, the way you orchestrate your poems' components... I could go on. Yes, you change over time (a lot more than I, to my embarrassment) but the quality abides.
....so much happens when we aren't looking.....
I love this poem Fleda...a poem of presence...again, of course.